This is cool - very clear and techno-like! The beat is very strong and I liked how you made it stereo, with the bassline on the right speaker and the tune on the left... maybe (I arranged my speakers the wrong way round lol!). =D
However, it's kinda repetitive, and the melody seems to be out of time (in some occation). Maybe you could add more variety to it and well - simply practice more! It's definitely not bad for a first-time though!
and yes, it's the first song i ever made.
And I just used like 5 .wav files to
make the whole song. I first wanted to
make it Trance, but that was way too
hard for my first try...
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